Tuesday 16 October 2012

Live Evil: New Ending

First Draft Version:
EXTERIOR- CEMTERY- NIGHT

Rebecca gets lost and begins to hear weird sounds as she walk forwards — a trailing, Dolly zoom. The camera does a 360 degree point of view, wide shot of Rebecca. This then cuts to a point of view pan, wide shot. The camera then zooms on to her feet where we see a dissolved hand grab her ankle. She screams and the camera rapidly zooms out into a bird’s eye view shot. After her scream can no longer be heard the camera then slowly zooms back into the soil to show that it has been meddled with, and indicate that she has been pulled inside.

Updated Version:

Exterior: CEMTERY - NIGHT
Rebecca gets lost and begins to hear weird sounds as she walk forwards — a trailing, Dolly zoom. The camera does a 360 degree point of view, wide shot of Rebecca. This then cuts to a point of view pan, slanted wide shot. The camera then zooms on to her feet where we see a dissolved hand grab her ankle. 

 MONTAGE- (film and cemetery)

She struggles to find something to hold onto, in order to prevent herself from being dragged into the soil. This is shown from different shots that vary from a high angle shot of her on the floor to an extreme close up of her scared and desperate facial expression. Cut- in of her hands reaching out for something to grab are also used.

“Flashback”
The camera’s point of view shows Rebecca escaping from the hands grip by kicking villain and gets up; she grabs the camera and runs- shown through handheld camera
“Back to present”
Rebecca breaks free using the same means as she did in the movie — shown through an extreme close up of her feet. She then gets up and begins to run, this is shown through a dolly zoom. She then bumps onto the caretaker who grabs her arms in order to prevent her from leaving the cemetery — shown through two-shot which cuts to a high angle point of view shot of the caretaker. An extreme close up shot of the caretaker’s hands is used to show him suddenly loosening his grip on her arm, this cut to an extreme close up shot of his shocked expression followed by a cut in of his feet where we can see the dissolved hand grab his foot. The screen then fades to black.

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